Draft #2 Remembering Fri

We check Tests 5 and 6 pages 47-48.  You take a quiz over subject/verb agreement.

Look at the grading grid.  What will help people's papers get "A's"?

You read each other's drafts.


Homework:


1.  Create the Final Version of your Remembering essay, due Monday.

2.  Do Tests 1 and 2 pages 53-54.

Draft #1 Remembering Due

We go over Test 3 and 4.

We talk about sentence types.

You build some sentences.

Then you read each other's drafts.

Homework:

1.  Work on Draft #2 of your Remembering essay.

2.  Do Tests 5 and 6 pages 47 and 48 in Brush Up.

3.  Read and do pages 49-52 in Brush Up.

The Remembering Paper

We talk about pages 39-42 in Brush Up.

You do Test 1 and 2 and we check.

Then we talk about the Remembering essay, and read pages 112-114 in Seeing the Pattern.

Homework:

1. You write Draft #1 of your Remembering essay.  You should have at least two pages to bring to class.

2.  Do Tests 3, 4, 5 and 6 on pages 45-48 for Wednesday.

Final Version Due

We go over Tests 5 and 6.

You edit your papers before you turn them in.

We read pages 118-119 in Seeing the Pattern.  In your daybook write about either #1 or #2 under "Reacting to the Topic" on page 121.

  You take a quiz over homophones.

Homework:


1.  Do pages 39-42 about Subject-Verb Agreement in Brush Up.

Reading Draft #2

We check the tests you did for homework.

You read each other's drafts.

We talk about revising and editing.

Homework:

1.  You create the Final Version of your Description essay. Bring both drafts and all comment sheets to turn in as well.

2.  Do Tests 5 and 6 pages 151-152.  There will be a quiz on homophones on Friday.

Reading Draft #1

We practice Homonyms., looking at pages 143-146.  You create an index card for each of the homonyms you confuse.

Then you each read and write about two papers.

Then we talk about sentence types. 


Homework:

1. Revise your draft.  Add detail, think about the beginning and the ending, think about making a point about what you're showing us.

2.  Do Tests 1, 2, 3 and 4 on homonyms, pages 147-150.

Putting Together a Rough Draft

Homonyms? We practiced using too/to and two and there/they're/their

We look at Tests 5 and 6 pages 37 and 38.

We look again at "A View from the Bridge".  You copy down paragraph 35 in your daybook. Which fish?

We talk about writing a draft and what you are describing.


Homework:

1.  Bring Draft #1 of your Descriptive paper.

2.  In Brush Up do page 143 on homonyms and read page 144 and do the practice on page 145.  Be ready to practice these. Concentrate!

More About Description

Verbs? We go over verb tests 2,3 and 4.

We read pages 127-129 in Pattern. You discuss in groups.

Homework:


1.  I have shaded many of the subjects in the handout of "A View from the Bridge."  You read through and underline twice each verb that goes with a shaded subject.

2.  Do Tests 5 and 6 on pages 37 and 38 of Brush Up.


2.  Be observing and taking notes in your daybook to use for your first essay.

Description

Look at this picture.  Spend some time in your daybook describing what you see in as much detail as possible.

Then we read pages 163-165 in Pattern.  We discuss.

I give you the assignment sheet for your first paper.

We work on the verb tests, pages 33-38 in Brush Up.

Homework:

1. Begin observing something that you will describe in your first paper.  Be a "spy" and take notes.  You need to have at least one full page of notes in your daybook about the subject you are observing.

2.  Do Verb Tests #2,3 and 4  pages 34-36 in Brush Up.

Lego Build #2

First of all, we review subjects and verbs. Then we check Tests 1 and 2.

Then you do Test 3 and 4 in less than 10 minutes.

Then you build each other's objects once again.

All related papers get handed in.

Homework:

1.  In your daybook do a freewrite about the whole Lego assignment.  Fill up a page discussing what made it easy or hard, difficulties you had, or ways you can think it does or does not relate to real-world writing.  Perhaps you could describe the stages you went through as you did the assignment.

2.  Do Tests 5 and 6 pages 25,26.

3.  Do page 27 and Practices 1, 2, 3 and 4 on pages 29-32.

Build Your Legos #1

We talk about subjects and verbs. Put on the board your scores for Pratice 1 and 2.

Then we work on creating some sentences and labelling subjects and verbs.

Then you build each other's projects.

Homework:

1.  Make notes on the "Revise Your Directions" sheet about possible ways to improve your directions.  Then make changes in your typed directions, and bring both the new and old directions to class on Friday.  You'll build with the revised directions on Friday and then turn all the material in on Friday.

2.  Do Tests 1 and 2 pages 21,22 over Subjects and Verbs.

Purpose, Audience, Genre

First of all, we go over the Practice exercises in the Introduction to Brush Up.

Then we discuss audience, purpose and genre in the real world and in class.

I give you the Lego assignment, and you get started.

At the end of class we look at Subjuects and Verbs on page 17 in Brush Up. 

Homework:

1.  Finish creating your written instructions, and type them up for Wednesday, when two students will try to follow your instructions and build your object.

2.  Do page 17 in Brush Up and Practice 1 and Practice 2 on pages 19 and 20. 

Diagnostic Test

Today you take the diagnostic test.  There is no grade for this;  we're finding out where you need practice.

When you finish, quietly hand in your test, and read pages 4-6 in Patterns.

If you have time, go back and read page 3.  In your daybook, write down the list of words as explained on page 3.

Homework:

1.  In your daybook write a freewrite that fills one page on the topic of the photograph on page 3 of the text.  Remember, in a freewrite you can take off in any direction as you are writing.

2.  In Brushup do the practice exercises on pages 3-13 ( Practice 1-12).  DO NOT read the explanations before each secion.  Just follow the directions and see how well you can do.  If you wish, you may read explanations for difficult sections.  Do check you answers when you are done and clearly mark which ones you miss.